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Wilde Academy - Chapter 1

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I think this would be better as illustrated smut,it really doesn't work as a porn comic.

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Too much talking not enough fucking
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Story is pretty good but when making a comic like a fanfic I suggest you follow the rule of show don't tell to make it even better. Draw what is happening instead of writing it all down that way it feels more smoother and easier to comprehend.

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i know wat you mean it starts to get less interesting when you have to read a descriptive of the scene

plus at sum point it gets you out of the store

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Bud idc if its written in jawa cuneiform, its hawt n sexi

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I came here to look at porn comics but Random just gave me a crash course on fanfic story telling..

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The things you learn