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Oh my fucken god, this shit is hilariously horrible. What wild ass writing. Every time i read the antagonists lines all i heard was the voice of some pompous ass douche of a butler at a wine tasting. His voice sounded internally to me like he's out here just sniffing the wine while he's out here saying shit like "mmm, yeesss. Quite right. Indutatibly so. Mmm." And that voice completely broke his character for me.

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That's just wrong man

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Which fuck ing mod saw this and said "hmm yes, nothing is wrong in this" like what tha actual fuck

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Im sinning too much johnny dins would be proud

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I meant johnny sins

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I'm afraid to read

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too much text

to be honest

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ATTACK THE D POINT

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7/10 decent but not the best writing 

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Yeah....theyre not even hiding the p ed o philia at this point, if you enjoy this sort of content kindly do yourself a favour and k i ll yourself

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I fully agree with you, whoever made this is fucking sick too