the art is fine, yall are just hating, somone spent hard work making this comic and put alot of effort into this even tho they obviosly dont know what theyr doing and yall are hating on them because they tried there best?, its disgusting how negative yall are
Dude there's nothing wrong with criticism and calling something bad when it's obviously bad, it's cool that someone's trying but it's the internet people don't have to be nice or respect you,the art looks like it's coming from someone who this is their first time doing this and I can only wish the best and hope they improve but I'm not gonna call bad art good, it's as simple as that man.
yeah but i feel like the kind of critisism the maker wants is like "i didnt like the orpotions" or "the story should have more build up" not "THE STORY AND ART IS SO ASS!!!"
bro BALLas there a reason why your girl betrayed you ✌✌Maybe get your twink ass some muscle before i banish you into a rift with atlas, baruuk, and kullervo inside too 🤣🤣
You need a depressed immortal teenager to even gain your full potential ✌️✌️😭 be quiet and leave my goat kullervo out of this at least he's more useful then you are to a team 😭😭😭 plus he's one of the only actually sentient frames so he's already above your goofy hat looking ass
Didn't you need your Sugar daddy Erra to help you do anything? 🤣🤣 and plus the drifter over here with me getting buns from 1999 while you got cucked by the lotus ✌🤣The operator got left behind on Tau, you know the place you tried to run away and hide at when the drifter easily beat all your Archons? ✌🤣🤣. Get your dumb ah out of here bro and dont even insult my drip when you get a cylinder for a hat gng </3
At least it's just a hat and my skull doesn't include a tophat😭✌️ and the drifter is just the operator in a different font lmao and you had to sneak around the drifter had to sneak around me to even get the thing to defeat me😭✌️ and yapperoni you got the worst drip in the entire verse😭 hell dagaths horses look better than you and I didn't get chucked lotus left because I wanted to destroy everything while I leave your goofy asses in a dying universe of the infested and shi✌️✌️✌️
Gng my idle animation is literally me taking off my top hat and playing with it 😭😭 And gng you basiclly kissed the VR version of the lotus, get that Margulis shi out of here ✌✌and Brotato chip you tried to scaddle just cause you started losing, have some honor on your orokin blood ✌😭 Plus you got folded by that depressed 14 year old and his mom while at full strength 😭😭 Ts just sad bro
also fuck you, and you won’t get any notifications so i don’t give a fuck since you’re never gonna see this FUCKK YOUUUU YOU “ai slop” ON EVERYTHING, YOU BRAIN RUNTED FOOL!
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Shi if it smell like cake and look like cake then it's cake? why are people complaining.
Ts is ass😭😭😭
Its a good anime and this is consensual so morally this is allllllrighty, but uh the art is kinda bad.
i mean its aight art is so-so
anime peak tho
can't wait for the lung cancer to set in
man i thought shi was no sex...
it's trash
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the art is fine, yall are just hating, somone spent hard work making this comic and put alot of effort into this even tho they obviosly dont know what theyr doing and yall are hating on them because they tried there best?, its disgusting how negative yall are
Please, don't white knight. It's not a good look on you.
Dude there's nothing wrong with criticism and calling something bad when it's obviously bad, it's cool that someone's trying but it's the internet people don't have to be nice or respect you,the art looks like it's coming from someone who this is their first time doing this and I can only wish the best and hope they improve but I'm not gonna call bad art good, it's as simple as that man.
yeah but i feel like the kind of critisism the maker wants is like "i didnt like the orpotions" or "the story should have more build up" not "THE STORY AND ART IS SO ASS!!!"
The translation is Genuinely so ASSSS the dialogue IS TRASHH, the story is MIDDDD 90% sex with NO BUILDUP.. but the art is great! I agree
aight the mods gotta like ban these fucking bots ova has dog this shit getting out of hand
Good comic too bad ova here and his bots downvoted it
The art is bad, the panels look goofy, I would have to agree with anybody that says it looks bad, plus it just seems like tit slop
hey Ballas, dont go cruising around the origin system again, its on sight next time
I'm coming back for my girl lotus you dirty bum ruining team synergy 😭✌️ don't step to your maker buddy
bro BALLas there a reason why your girl betrayed you ✌✌Maybe get your twink ass some muscle before i banish you into a rift with atlas, baruuk, and kullervo inside too 🤣🤣
You need a depressed immortal teenager to even gain your full potential ✌️✌️😭 be quiet and leave my goat kullervo out of this at least he's more useful then you are to a team 😭😭😭 plus he's one of the only actually sentient frames so he's already above your goofy hat looking ass
Didn't you need your Sugar daddy Erra to help you do anything? 🤣🤣 and plus the drifter over here with me getting buns from 1999 while you got cucked by the lotus ✌🤣The operator got left behind on Tau, you know the place you tried to run away and hide at when the drifter easily beat all your Archons? ✌🤣🤣. Get your dumb ah out of here bro and dont even insult my drip when you get a cylinder for a hat gng </3
At least it's just a hat and my skull doesn't include a tophat😭✌️ and the drifter is just the operator in a different font lmao and you had to sneak around the drifter had to sneak around me to even get the thing to defeat me😭✌️ and yapperoni you got the worst drip in the entire verse😭 hell dagaths horses look better than you and I didn't get chucked lotus left because I wanted to destroy everything while I leave your goofy asses in a dying universe of the infested and shi✌️✌️✌️
Gng my idle animation is literally me taking off my top hat and playing with it 😭😭 And gng you basiclly kissed the VR version of the lotus, get that Margulis shi out of here ✌✌and Brotato chip you tried to scaddle just cause you started losing, have some honor on your orokin blood ✌😭 Plus you got folded by that depressed 14 year old and his mom while at full strength 😭😭 Ts just sad bro
I remember this manga, just like this doujin a disappoint and waste of time.
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For 1 second i thought i would see something good here, rookie mistake of mine
Is this AI? It looks like either AI or someone's second attempt at a porn comic. And that text is impossible to see, much less read.
Ai would (sadly) make something better than this
also fuck you, and you won’t get any notifications so i don’t give a fuck since you’re never gonna see this FUCKK YOUUUU YOU “ai slop” ON EVERYTHING, YOU BRAIN RUNTED FOOL!
Yeah, I see your message. I just don't give a shit.